All Comments on 'Being with Ben Ch. 03'

In some parts of the USA, marriage between cousins is permitted and is not incest.

lucky bugger

Very enjoyable; hope you will continue to write. I would like to see you continue this series with stories about how Sam & Ben deal with the reality of being married. They have the foundation of love & a strong sexual attraction...now what?

Great Story line. Romantic, Hot; basically a good story. You need a little work on grammar and punctuation, but otherwise it is a winner. Excellent characterisations! Keep writing. We want to see more of your work.

wow, that was a seriously kick-ass story. great sex description, thrilling tale of lust and love. Keep up the good work. I'll look out for any new stories you write.

a ittle odd but very sweet and romantic

how could ANYONE not like that story wish it were a book in like series dipicting their lives together THANKS il keep an eye out for future stories because u are truely a great no INCREDIBLE author keep up the good work!!

No matter people say it was great.You should write chapter 4

loved it.. delightful.. depiction of main and supporting characters very credible.

Great storie! the storie line was so romantic!!!

Great story chased, you had me hooked from the first line of the first chapter 5 stars and 2 thumbs up. Your details were perfect, the storyline flowed nicely and your characters personalities reflected the image of a literary genius, I look forward to more stories from you

This story is one of the best I've ever read. It was a very good love story, it had everything a love story needs, love, great sex, and a wedding. I hope theres more to come. toby9790.

the wedding spoiled it im afraid :( it was so hot with both of them together but the fact that they married after 2 days makes me realise how unrealistic it is.

Thank you for a great story. The shotgun wedding was a surprise yet enjoyable. What are stories for - eh?

- Fellow Canadian

Great story. Childhood sweet hearts with the Wedding a surprise and made the story. Loved it

I know that feeling. Hope you write some about these two after a couple of years together.

I Love this story. It's the BEST! Thank You writer

Johnny

loved it, I am in awe of your talent

thank you

Good story but even though it was three chapters long it had the potential to be a much more detailed and involved story.

Other commentators have pointed out that a relationship with a 3rd cousin isn't strictly, or legally, incest.

One thing I did want to pick up on in this last chapter is where Ben says to his Father that marriages at 18 seldom last. I met my wife at school she was 12 and I was 13 years old. We were married when she was 18, we recently celebrated our 45 wedding anniversary. If the love is strong enough it doesn't matter what age you marry at the marriage will survive.

And with a perfect ending too.

What more could you ask for !

Easily worth 10 Stars.........

Rapier

Congratulations! Perfect story! I cumming! So lovely and sexy! Just perfect! 💯💯❤❤🔞🔞