by oliver57
Excellent storyline and compelling characters, would have been a great opportunity to expand this to multiple chapters to add ever more depth.
That was ridiculously sexy! You even have my dream dynamic here. Older, experienced woman seduces and uses a younger, innocent guy. And the part where she shows him how things are done but since he is naive, he doesn’t know any better, and I love it! I would love to read more stories from you in the future!
I love this! It echoes a story that I've just posted, which itself is semi-autobiographical.
Absolutely loved it! Well written with a fully progressive theme development for a stand-alone story (unless you want to take it farther along?). Hope you'll continue to write more similarly-themed stories in the near future. My compliments and best wishes!
Wonderful! Well written with characters to care about! I hope their time together continues - and you write about them. Thanks.
Good story but the part about Chris having no friends and no extra curricular activities made me sad. That's the problem with 24/7 total power exchange, it's completely toxic. What happens when it gets boring, or she decides she's had enough of him? Femdom is an old man's kink. When I read stories about older "mistresses" enslaving healthy young men, I just feel sad for them.