by jstwndr1n2
Ok story pretty good subject matter. Could use more details about her body.
I couldn't make it far enough into the story to see if it was good or not.
The writing was horrible. Punctuation, grammar, quotation marks, abbreviations, 'text speak', word usage, etc.
A volunteer editor wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole. It would be too much work to do for free.
Go to the library and take out a grammar book. Use an online dictionary for spelling,. When you're done with the first grammar book, get another. Make sure you know how the English language works before you write another word.
Please.