by PDreadful
What is incredible is your mastery of creating suspense, torturous delay of satisfaction, and bringing your readers into the same torturous suspense..
I feel like Ben, being controlled by Dean, waiting, begging for the next step, the next chapter.
Can hardly wait..
DV19
They acknowledge they love each other then dean keeps calling Ben straight again. I’m waiting for Ben to bottom so Dean will get it and stop going backwards!!!!
I just love how Dean is so conflicted over his need to dominate Ben. You can really feel how he's so new to it and really does care about not actually hurting Ben. He gets dominant and then blushes with these moments of gentleness, like there's a sweet or tender thought going through his head. I love it.
Hot dominant/submissive roles in this very sexual intense story of two men finding their way. Great!
Is this entire story just “I love you” then “you’re straight”?
this is deeply unrealistic and so annoying.