All Comments on 'Bending the Rules Pt. 04: Control'

Akachi is a very interesting addition to the roster of known people. I love a guy that pours himself into his work, and is willing to think of different ways to do what needs to be done. Awesome to have a mentor willing to work with him on his goals. Willing to debate and compromise with him to get him working towards what he's after, while making sure he's realistic about what he's trying to do.

A lovely cliffhanger there for us again. Mostly just worried for the new girl. Adana still has a lot of work before their pact works well for them. Though, that is kind of the point, isn't it? The things in life worth having are worth working hard to get them. Nuru didn't just decide to stay a Level One and charm his way into bedrooms he wanted. He's working towards something bigger~ the other part is just the icing on the cake. Making it all the sweeter ^.^

Fantastic story, the depth of the story is unreal 5 stars can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks