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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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Her name changed to Frankie part way through p2. Very sensual story. I don’t have any religious tendencies but I can appreciate that some people could easily be offended. Thanks for the trigger warning.

Tess (UK)

LinaxticLinaxticover 2 years ago

Very well written. Absolutely loved it. Only had two things: 1) you accidentally called Angela Frankie parkway through. 2) the whole hymen being a barrier that's broken on the first time is inaccurate and kinda took me out of the moment. Even bleeding on the first time doesn't usually happen with enough prep and gentleness, though I could forgive that for the poetic idea of a blood sacrifice. Just a minor peeve. Overall it's a really good story.

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