All Comments on 'Beneath the Ice Ch. 03'

Delightful story!

5

Getting better and better.

I love the way you keep building the tension between the two of them, and the role Zoe plays. Really good.

I am really loving this. Thanks

Well written Harliquin story. Enjoyable read

Sweet and sexy and full of heart. Very nice. Thank you.

Gets better every time. This is so beautiful and really romantic.

Take Sarah up on her offer, girl!!! Quickly!

Fantastic writing as always. xoxo

Great build up. I love how Zoe still calls him Grumpy!

Thank you! After my ex cost me everything and covid further destroyed my finances; I rely on Literotica, Inkitt, and my library card. Thanks again, l absolutely love your stories!

Love the story and the characters. I'm thinking Sarah should have her own story sometime.

Fast moving relationship but i can suspend my disbelief. I like him much better than her, but she'll grow on me,

Glad to see your back but this relationship has moved at a mach 5 pace. He spends one weekend with Zoe and hes nicknamed her and doing nose touches with her already... I think he also let himself into their home after spending so little time with them (if I'm reading this right). Everythings happened much too fast.

Oh great goodness, MugsyB is back! Comforter and believer in true love, stalwart plower through thickets of love despair, connector of the Island of Hockey at Champion Level with life as it’s lived. Welcome oh lovely sage. And thank you thank you.

Why doesnt the gosdiping slut Sarah help gind the courses or prograns that can help them instead of obsessing over relationship with Alexei!!

Just shows how low and cheap some people are