All Comments on 'Benton Boys Pt. 01'

by ChasteJake

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

The wording was awkward throughout this story - is English your first language? The sentence structure was not typical which made it hard to follow quite a bit. Interesting concept and look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

sci-fi?

ChasteJakeChasteJakealmost 3 years agoAuthor

No, English is not my native; I mainly used Grammarly to help me. But thanks for the feedback; I'll look into that more.

Actually, it's more fiction and less science :D

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love this story. Keep going with it please

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