All Comments on 'Bernard and the Queen'

Hello, Clodius. : )

I am quite surprised that no one else has posted any comments on this story, and disappointed with myself for not having sent direct feedback or posted here weeks earlier.

I like the fact that Bernard is an unusual central character (naive and "innocent", but not stupid), and I find the 17th-century just-about-French court setting of interest, too.

I noticed your opening indication that you might wish to expand this story to become a longer tale (or series of tales?) : I would like to encourage you to do so.

(But I sincerely hope that Bernard would learn from his experiences and become more active in any future adventures with the Queen and his other new lady friends, and that he will *not* merely be their "boy toy".)

Good Luck. : )

A reader in New York City.

I really liked this! Delicately erotic and paced just right. A delicious story. Would be happy to read more about this sensuous blackmail!