All Comments on 'Beside the firepit'

Excellent writing. Your story has all the elements of a great cuckold experience. Pregnancy risk and going down on her sloppy sperm-drenched pussy. Keep up the good work.

Brings back some memories when I first saw Sue being fucked by two of our friends. Is there a part 2?

Well done

First, she said no, it would hurt their marriage, but she had already agreed to a gang bang the following evening.

nonsense

Another mentally ill writer starting with a CUCK SHIT!

Well done... You have a bright future in writing cuck crap for the cesspool of slimes. -1

Hey looking there, we have another troll writer. Awwwww, and another troll commented. It really is Christmas time.

This cuck should just place a bed outside de man,s dorm at campus, his wife should lie on it, and let every student take her. The nice husband would then lick her clean for the next one to fuck her. Itwould be their ultimate delight.

The cucks need to publish in the "gay" category. They aren't men.

Fun story.

I don’t think I would suggest that she be there Guns do shoot accidentally

This marriage will end soon! She has lost all respect for him! And with no respect love won't survive!

"I don't know," said Maggie, "let's just go to sleep now." "I'm tired."

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Do NOT enclose every single sentence in quotation marks! A 10 year-old child should know that.

She just fucked three college guys and then says, "I don't want to ruin our marriage." Totally stupid. Better ending... Maggie came back to the house and the house was locked. She knocked and knocked but her husband wouldn't answer. She had to go back with the college boys and ask for a place to stay. They took her back to their apartment and fucked her all night. The next day all her shit was in the street and her Facebook page had several pictures of her being fucked by these three guys. The cheating skank slut left town before she could even be served divorce papers.

I hope she has Plan-B (the morning after pill) in her purse.

Never have and I can't ever imagine letting my wife do anything like this. This is what happened to my first marriage. My wife Jenny was taking night classes. She came in late as I heard a vehicle driving away. I wondered why she didn't drive her car home. She had had some problems with it but I could fix just about anything on a vehicle. I went to greet her and as I approached I asked if her car broke down and why she hadn't called me to come get her as I hugged her I knew that we had a serious problem. I said you are drunk and who is he I can smell him. She began to cry and saying I sorry Will. After class some of us went to Gill's for a bit to eat. We had some drinks and some guys joined us. We were asked to dance and I'm sorry I let myself be taken advantage of. I'm sorry please Will forgive me I'm sorry. I turned and went to bed without a word. She came to bed and started to get in and I said please sleep somewhere other than with me. It was a long time trying to get over her cheating on me. She treated me as anyone could expect. She made sure I knew where she was every minute when we were apart. We were starting to get back to normal. We were out one evening enjoying ourselves and all of a sudden Jenny just froze. I asked what's wrong? I looked in the direction that she was and seen a guy that I had never seen before. I asked who is that? She dropped her head and said that's him. I said you mean SOB that you cheated with.? Yes can we leave? No don't move and if he comes don't say a word unless you ready for divorce. She said I don't want a divorce I love you only but if he says something I don't like I will tell him so. It wasn't very long and the SOB was standing at our table and said hey beautiful are you ready for another night of fun. Jenny kicked that cocky bastard in the nut and he dropped like a rock. I actually laughed. She looked at me and asked can we go home now my love? Yes we can.

Great story - it’s so hot to gang bang a married woman. Hopefully they do get her knocked up. 5 stars!!

GREAT first story! I hope you keep writing.

Sincerely,

Cuckold Paul

Great story to start off! Hopefully plenty of more chapters to come on this story.

Good start, and good luck with additional stories

Excellent story. A very naughty sluty wife love it.

Little by little I have been guiding my wife into that direction

Looking forward to the next part