All Comments on 'Bess Ch. 15'

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LancerInLALancerInLAover 11 years ago
Is she learning?

Well written as always. But is Dee learning, or just jealous?

She has a problem that was caused by sex (and then lieing about it, which is unresolved) and then compounds it by more sex (threesome), so she uses sex for forgiveness?

This is a deeper problem than it seems. But, what do I know, I am not a doctor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This is just getting ridiculous and drawn out.

dozendozenalmost 9 years ago
Great story ...

... one detail: "Your mere present excites me." I think that you meant "presence". You have made this error before.

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