by SexyChele
Never had I read a story where the character's name came up seven times in a paragraph. Sure, the two main characters were both male, but there's still a way to write the tale without using their names that much.
Seriously, the writing itself distracted from any quality the sex scene could have had.
wowoowowowowowowowowowowo yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!