All Comments on 'Best Friends Ch. 07'

make stories longer.

I'm really liking the stories, but you should definitely condense them. Seven 1 page chapters is too much to expect everyone to follow. A more thorough description of everyone involved would be welcome, too. Keep it up =)

You may not apprecciate bad feedback, but every writer must face critiscism in their career. In the 2nd or 3rd chapter I left a comment asking why this was in the incest group. It took me the next 5 chapters to figure out. What a shame having an 11 inch cock (really??) and there was no use of it. This was one big tease with no payoff in the end.

Awesome ending a bit funny :)

if this is all true,then you truly are the luckiest guy on earth

Are a lucky bastard, you has two chicks in your bed..

I'm starting to get the feeling that this is fake

Good story ruined by that incest shit

Right!

Out of grade 3 or so, Win has great spell and grammar-check and though.