All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever'

I like it. A little rushed. I suppose you are going to expand on this story. I did not see any romance in this installment. If you are going to leave this as it is, it should have been under erotic couplings. There are directions this story can go and it is up to the writer. You can go back and build up to the present or you can continue on and let the romance start. I hope you keep writing. Thanks for your time and imagination.

This needs part 2 more than I need water in the desert!

Suddenly Holly became Melody...

Was became what

Often friends don't want to make first move. Drinking does remove inhibitions and allows true desire to come out. Has happened to many. Better to take a chance(even a drunken one) than regret it

Great story. Loved it. The ding had me snorting~

Way too short for romance section. Little to no story. Maybe try rewriting it with a more in depth characters and a beginning middle and ending. Not a bad start though.

(12/9/2023) Excellent short story. But why did you stop writing?