All Comments on 'Best Friends Forever Ch. 03'

by GreatWhiteNorthern

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Still a good premise.

Still too rushed.

He wanted to see her ass. OK, he saw it. Now what? Nothing at all. Disappointing.

No reluctance at all about anything.

Every sex scene results in almost immediate orgasms. Aw, c'mon.

Three stars.

PammmPammmabout 3 years ago

Such an extremely well written and arousing story, all three chapters. Please give us more. You have a very unique talent and it should be shared with everyone. Thank you so much again. I will wait patiently and expectantly for Chapter Four.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Still hoping for a few more sequels! Very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Where are you now

Crying out for a sequel. Did/ do you publish elsewhere?

hejohejoover 10 years ago
Two errors

1. In the second chapter when they first made love He slid right in . What happened to her hymen if she had no experience at all?

2. In the last chapter when he slid his dick into her it would have felt like an ice dildo was poked into her and it would have felt like hot water was poured on him.

I gave you a Five on each chapter because every thing else was top notch. please keep writing.

Reiner43Reiner43over 11 years ago
Brings back nice memories

Nice erotic series. Very realistic and we'll written

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yesterday

Tender and well written. Your story caused me to remember and relive memories of yesterday. Thank you for a nice gift.

gmg311gmg311over 13 years ago
I loved it

This so reminded me of the 1st time I got it in the face. Your 3 chapters are awesome. I hope there is a 4th coming!

redbaron172redbaron172over 13 years ago
Keep it going!!!!

Great story..... can't wait for more!!! you are one of the best writers on here..... please continue!!!

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