by GreatWhiteNorthern
Still a good premise.
Still too rushed.
He wanted to see her ass. OK, he saw it. Now what? Nothing at all. Disappointing.
No reluctance at all about anything.
Every sex scene results in almost immediate orgasms. Aw, c'mon.
Three stars.
Such an extremely well written and arousing story, all three chapters. Please give us more. You have a very unique talent and it should be shared with everyone. Thank you so much again. I will wait patiently and expectantly for Chapter Four.
1. In the second chapter when they first made love He slid right in . What happened to her hymen if she had no experience at all?
2. In the last chapter when he slid his dick into her it would have felt like an ice dildo was poked into her and it would have felt like hot water was poured on him.
I gave you a Five on each chapter because every thing else was top notch. please keep writing.
Nice erotic series. Very realistic and we'll written
Tender and well written. Your story caused me to remember and relive memories of yesterday. Thank you for a nice gift.
This so reminded me of the 1st time I got it in the face. Your 3 chapters are awesome. I hope there is a 4th coming!
Great story..... can't wait for more!!! you are one of the best writers on here..... please continue!!!