by Kantarii
You tell a very nice story. More to it than just wham, bam, take my cum.
I'm looking forward to more.
First chapter has generated enough interest for me to want to read the second chapter. Looking forward to Kevin and Brian taking it to the next level.
Wonderful story.
Well-told.
Erotic.
Everything that Literotica aims to be!
You have us going now. That was fast. The least Brian can do is fuck the boy a couple times a week. So, we gotta wait and see how he seduces the stud?
great start, just take your time with it, this could be epic if you do it right........
I enjoyed your beginning story line. Looking forward to the development of their relationship.
I'm always impressed by your ability to create genuine chatacters who feel so real, have self awareness & empathy, & who seem to perfectly echo the desire to be loved & to love, that we all crave. (Most of us anyway.)
Your writing has grown, taken on a depth & elegance. I love reading your stories, love the humor & the the genuine human-ness you create seemingly effortlessly.
So looking forward to 02, when you get the chance to take us all further on in the fascinating narrative
I can see good things happening with Brian. Look forward to reading more. :-)
Kantarii, I've finally finished the story I was working on and had the time to begin reading your new series. I know it's just getting warmed up, but I just wanted to comment on the new style of your writing. This one is really well crafted, and I'm looking forward to reading more and getting a peek into that diary you're using to inspire this series.
I have so many thoughts and emotions about your character in this story. Again, your dialog is amazing and story line always tight and together.....love it!
This is a great start to your new story K! Your writing has come a long way over the past few years.
Remarkable as a prequel to Sluts "Triangle" as Kantarii has a way about her that cannot be described in any review. You need to read for yourself and feel the raw magnatism she generates by her very words. It's seldom you can actually hear the authors voice yet with her everything comes through precise ... an unknown gem.
This segment of the (trilogy?) gave me goosebumps. I say "trilogy," because I hope another story is forthcoming. Kudos to the brilliance within this Lady.
Nice start to the story. I’m looking forward to the story making me hot reading what you’re planning. Thanks for a great start. 👍