All Comments on 'Best Friends' Friday Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Missed opportunity

I think you could have had the characters explore each other’s dicks in a bit more detail especially since the inciting incident was one character noticing that the other was circumcised. Additionally, perhaps valuing us to where the characters live (ISA? Europe?) would help explain why circumcision is or is not unusual

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