All Comments on 'Best Friend's Journey Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

What would a cuck story be without the "big cock"? As though anyone is interested or believes that shit. 1*

pkp033pkp033over 1 year ago

I continue to enjoy how erotic your characters are while simultaneously trying to work through their sexual kinks

BPollardBPollardover 1 year ago

Great story! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Really enjoying these characters!

perversionsandtransgressionsfanperversionsandtransgressionsfanover 1 year ago

Was waiting for part 4 eagerly.. the part 3 was one of the hottest writings i have seen here especially with the narration and the dialogues between the characters.. the bull taking control.. however i am sorry the part 4 is a bit disappointing to me.. maybe it is my own expectations.. but it seems that the story hasn't progressed much.. i was hoping for development either in the narrator's perspective towards his friend Carl growing to bully him and finding more ways of screwing Jess in front of him or behind his back.. or maybe development in Jess making her hungrier for more.. another development could be introducing sexual tension between Zach and Jess which leads to the bull becoming a cuck.. maybe a threesome for Jess with Zach and the narrator .. anyway those are my imaginations for next part.. but have to give give credit to the writer.. brilliant series ... kudos to the effort

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this series!!!!!! Would love to see Jess and Sam cuck Carl harder - hooking up behind his back (and telling him later), denying him sexual contact with Jess, or spending the night together without him…. Also, would love to see Zach cucked hard too. Just random thoughts lol. Keep up the great work!

perversionsandtransgressionsfanperversionsandtransgressionsfanabout 1 year ago

I was wrong earlier this is a masterpiece series.. the writing is impeccable .. the pace is ideal.. very erotic.. pl continue

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