All Comments on 'Best Friends Pt. 07: Birthday Party'

Fantastic addition to the story. It really draws you in, and makes you feel you're part of it.

Can't wait until the next installment.

..all that passion and desire, but no outlet. Thank you for revisiting / rewriting this series, it's one of my favourite exhibitionism series on here and even better second time around. Still hoping Lisa gets her happy ending with Becky!

this was a really tense chapter really drew me in. poor Lisa she really wanted to tell Becky how she felt but was worried it would hurt the friendship between them. On top of that she now knows Becky is bisexual and is bitter about what could have been with the two of them. Becky's feelings are hurt as well i hope they will rekindle at some point.

looking forward to the next chapter

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I WILL BE PUBLISHING THE BOOK IN FULL ON LITEROTICA OVER THE COMING WEEKS AND MONTHS... so please don't feel cheated, you WILL get to find out what happens even if you don't buy the book.

But if you enjoy my work and want to support me as an indie writer, or you just can't wait to find out how the story ends, please consider buying the e-book.

Thank you for reading!

you carry off the sensoul parts really well and in include all the different emotions going on is like icing on the cake, well done.

Superbly realistic emotions... and a buildup to what I hope will happen between Lisa and Becky! Please more!!