All Comments on 'Best of Both Worlds'

I love the thought and your willingness to do so. Not to discourage you at all, but constructive criticism would be to try to have less (Valley Girl) in your tone of voice. But thanks again, l enjoyed it.

Loved the crescendo - the way you got filthier as you got more excited. I came hard with you xx

Sexy as always and I love this one.

Oh my Lacey.😘 I think I may have found my perfect neighbour 😍. Should an property become available next to me you will be the first to know 🍌💭💭💭 If anything comes available next too you 😉 PLEASE let me know . I will put your bins out for you, cut your lawn , and even trim your bush 🥰 if you so desire. Thank the baby B'jebus for our Lacey🤩

How about part two where they cuck his stuck up bitch wife until she submits to the new mistress of the house?

"Oh, I do keep saying that, because I know how hard you get when I say that"

Brilliant!

I’m not sure if it’s a speech impediment or an affectation and my intention isn’t to make fun of you or to denigrate your art. This story is well plotted out and the dialog is fairly consistent and believable, but I’d like to cautiously inquire if you are intentionally ending most words with a sort of gasp/hiccup sound. Almost an upwards or reverse glottal stop. I’ve never heard someone do this so I’m unsure if it’s part of the characters sexy voice or if it’s an unintentional and uncontrollable part of your speech. It took me a few minutes to get used to it. My mind seemed to fixate on that upward trending gasp and it would take me out of the story. I really hope this isn’t something uncontrollable as I’m not trying to bully you about your voice. But if it were a choice you made for this character, then it’s certainly a unique move.

I liked all the Foley for sure. It really helped make the story feel real. The blowjob was a big turn on. Well done.

On second thought it feels like you’re ending each sentence with the inflection not each word. Which makes it feel more likely to be controllable. I guess it could be described as a hiccuping or gasping upspeak/uptalk/high ending terminal. Aka valley girl kardashian speak, as noted by another commenter.