All Comments on 'Best Pick-up Line Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Beer, Broads and ...

Sex. Don't need more. Don't want less.

Baddogie59Baddogie59over 4 years ago
Good story

Great group story. Enjoyed reading it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hmm

Why would a group of swingers stay together when they are all submissive. I would have punched him out the second he started talking.

Pjam1968Pjam1968almost 2 years ago

Not realistic, can’t believe all 3 guys where cucks

StubbyoneStubbyoneover 1 year ago

The sex scenes weren’t bad, but virtually no warm up to any of the sex. No personalities came out, therefore difficult to identify with any character. Some conversation, other than “fuck me” would have been nice. The ending felt like you got tired of writing.

goodshoes2goodshoes212 months ago

You write damn good stories. Thanks.

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