by fbblvr37
You did a much better job than most who write stories like this. It really pushed my fetish buttons, and excellent descriptions of her muscle and the sex. My only criticism is: don't go overboard giving readers everything they want so soon. Draw the story out, and create some conflict, some uncertainty, some doubt in the reader's mind that things will work out well.
Loved it. So much so that was sad when it finished.
Would love a chapter two involving her helping him achieving his potential whilst her competing
Thanks for this super hot very sweet story! I usually go more for savage domination but this was really a beautiful and sweet and extremely sexy story.
Good read and a good stroke story. I've admired FBB's since I first saw Rachel McLish. As with many fans, it's a secret desire that most keep hidden from others. Keep up with your stories and thanks.
When living in California just out of the Air force, I to had dated a woman body builder. This story brings back many fond memories, how hard and incredible her body was...I think I have renewed my fetish now. Thanks