All Comments on 'Best Spring Ever Ch. 03'

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Haxaw11Haxaw11over 3 years ago
Missing persons ?

Who's Tommy ? Maybe you need to proofread your characters names.

Love the storyline especially where its going.

DocWordsDocWordsover 3 years agoAuthor

@Haxaw11 - you are correct about the Tommy error. My bad.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Can't believe you are down to one comment at this point. Great story for the genre which I seldom partake. Not into BDSM of any sort. A partner once suggested I tie her up and I declined. Wondered sometimes "what if" but we really didn't need to go there. Again no problem as long as the session is fully concessional and the submissive has the ultimate power to end it at any time. You have me hooked.

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
wow

I have to say u r one of the best authors I have read--one of those I read has passed away recently and hopefully another author will finish the stories---then I came across your stories and impressed by a third author--it as cool how u kept it hidden that it was Julia taught them and wondered if it was the Mom and the way u hid it so well was awesome--thanks for the stories

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My stories and characters are fiction. I wish I could have done all this stuff. The reviews from Anonymous, on the first few, nearly drove me away. Fortunately, some seasoned writers stepped up and warned me to take comments like those with a grain of salt. It helped. I read...

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