All Comments on 'Best Use for Hypnosis'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 4 years ago

Interesting story!

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I liked the story. I liked the story line and the flow. Frank is a little slow when it comes to women, but we all were in college. I enjoyed reading this and thanks for your time and imagination.

grayge37grayge37almost 4 years ago

Sounds too unbelievable. Guess a second submittal is in order.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Like the hypnosis prose. Comments about the reality of hypnosis limits suspension of disbelief , makes her falling in love seem silly in contrast. some pf the worse writing about sex ive ever read.

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