All Comments on 'Best Vacation Ever'

This was way too short. I was excited to read then it just fell flat .I was expecting all kinds of things to happen.

Make part 2 lil longer

Part 2? Longer version somewhere? It was a nice start, but we're hungry for more.

I really like the premise and potential for this story. I would encourage you to flesh it out a little more and perhaps submit a more substantial edition. But I'm not complaining! Keep up the good work!

more.......

To know that a woman you raped got pregnant? Doesn't make for a very good story. He was certainly a thoroughly despicable character and she was someone to pity. Makes for nothing erotic or interesting. Certainly not erotic. No stars.

Why would you have read a noncon fic on a porn site if you weren't into it? Some people here are so idiotic... I liked the fic, though, it's faboo and keep writing.~

I like the storyline but you need to go into much more detail on the sex story-line.

As others have said, it’s a bit short. I would have liked to know more about the woman’s motivation. Why would she agree to have sex for 50 dollars with a random hotel guest? Why did she not say anything about wearing a condom if she wanted to avoid pregnancy, especially with a young man who was a virgin? Without explanation, her behaviour does not seem believable. Perhaps she had good reasons for acting that way, but it would be much better if those reasons were explained. Apart from that, it had most of the elements needed to excite me, so I came.

Thats best way knocking up someone I did it to my girl friend and her mom even got my mom and my aunt her sister

Shouldn’t of placed it in Hawaii nowhere in the US is it standard for House cleaning to get maternity leave especially not two months worth

Prick!

He should have tried to find her, and if single, make her his wife. He loved her enough to put love pee in her, he should love her enough to be a father and husband

Hope you went to see her help her out marryied her

Rape is rape is rape is rape.