All Comments on 'Best Wingman Ever'

Cant wait for the next chapter great job 5 stars

A great beginning to a career in literotica!

Fantastic story. Loved it all. Great consept of threeway. Keep the story going.

Very nice thank you, i stayed very excited through the whole storie, i wish it was me.

Great 1st story so hot and well written

Solid effort - Needs a follow-on to see where they go from here. (If you do it, don't drag it out.) 5*

I really enjoyed that story. I thought the way it played out was quite inventive and it avoided the usual MFF threesome ‘standard plays’. Well done.

5 Stars. Excellent story, I just knew he'd nail his sister, I just didn't know how you planned it. You're a very talented writer, don't stop. I'd like to see a follow up of he and Sarah in another threesome or just together.

That was a hot 🔥 story x

OMG so fucking hot. Hope there's part two

Great, great, great. More.

An impressive first time story. I hope the two continue to enjoy each other's company in this intimate way.

That was so incredibly hot! I'd love to read more about the siblings exploits. Maybe a visit to uni once their folks get home.

It's with very few authors that I think about checking out their other work on here while I am still reading the current story. Imaging my substantial disappointment when I saw that this is your first post on Lit.

Very nicely done. This can't be your first attempt at writing. And hopefully it will not be your last as well.

I would definitively fav' you if I would be willing to give an erotica site my email address.

Home run (as we say in America) for a first time author! Can’t wait to read more of your work!

Not bad! I'd be curious to see what happens from here on out!

Off to a great start

Excellent story and unlike most stories on here this one felt realistic which makes it so much better. I can't wait to see what you write next.

Nicely paced, credible, and a great read. Compliments!

Excellent story. Definitely worth a few follow up chapters.

Outstanding. Keep writing

FUN!

Your first story? That was great!

I love this story. For some reason you don't see this scenario too often. It's my favorite kink. 10 stars if I could.

Great story, can't wait for more chapters!!!

Quite realistic! You obviously have a background in descriptive creative writing. This is an entertaining and somewhat believable story. Also, because of how you have written this, (potential for expansion{s}) and the inclusion of other family members (Next time, Jasmine may decide to casually mention how much her own brother and his sexy wife are attracted to Sarah), I look forward to additional chapters.

I loved the whole story but was convinced he was going to take his sister during the threesome, when she was bent forward over Jasmine, effectively presenting herself to her brother.

Fantastic! I can’t wait to read more from you.

One week on from this story being published, I just want to thank everyone who has taken the time to vote, comment on, or even just read this story. This was my first time writing fiction since my English Literature class in secondary school well over a decade ago, and I hated it back then!

I never intended to write a sequel, Wingman was supposed to be a “quick” stand-alone story when I was writing it, but the reception it has received and the comments you all have left have convinced me to continue it. I am currently toying with some ideas for it, but don’t want to force anything, so will only start the writing process when I have a solid concept in place.

I have other works in development too, which will probably be published before Wingman 2, so don’t expect it too soon; I am a slow writer, and it depends which story I get hooked on when I actually get the time to sit down and write.

Thank you all again, and I hope you enjoy the future stories I intend to write and publish on Literotica.

Great story. Really enjoyed it.

Very well written, and hot as hell. Threesome with your beautiful sister is the hottest I've read. Five stars!

Loved it. I can't wait to see what they find in tonight's bar crawl.

well written, hot as fuck, realistic, fresh and fun. one of the best.

Very good, I look forward to reading more of your stories

First Story, Very impressive! thanks and keep up the great work

That was fantastic. Only disappointment was when I went to go read your other stories and realized there haven't been any others posted yet

This was the first writing that I've come across on this site in a very long time.

It could stand an editor for those very few things that could stand to have been fixed. Don't get one of the volunteers here. You won't find one that could do a better job, or even as well as you did on your own.

Damn you Phalliccactus!

Your only submission on here, ‘The Best Wing Man Ever!’ has caused me to abandon my bullshit Judeo-Christian ethics about the eleventh commandment - ‘Thou Shall Not Screw that Thy Hot Ass Sisters Pussy’ - and I’ll surely burn in perdition for all of eternity. Thank you!!

Absolutely wonderful story with a few great twists. Definitely an author to go on my faves list

Great story especially being the first one you posted. I can’t wait to read your next ones.

Really nice, no over-arching, over-complicated story-line, Affectionate and fun.

Very good, real talent.

Welcome

A great story---thanks for sharing it!!!

It started out very awkwardly and then the amount of booze they consumed would likely have them under the table.

That's great. Thank you. I wish there was more.