All Comments on 'Beth and William Ch. 02'

Trying to push past the single thought of, ohhhh, I want one of those, grins. Wonderful story, with delicious characters who felt so real to me, as if they're alive somewhere, far away from mundane reality. Very erotic and tantalizing, more then just reading some yummy sex story. Very eager to see just how far he takes her. Will definatly be checking for this on the new posts...even before I look for mine, probably, lol.

I love everything about this story especially the delicious sexual liberation.

I remember reading this story once before a few years ago, luckily for me I rediscovered it by accident! As previously it’s an easy 5 stars. Your submissions appear to be quite short (a Lit page is very long!) but that’s irrelevant with this story it’s so intense and vivid as well as very realistic!

Thanks for sharing

Tess (UK)

The first chapter was pretty great, but this chapter kinda threw me off. His note mentioned him not a female. Also, kinda r ude to open the blinds back up, maybe she didn't wanna be exposed to others in her neighborhood?