All Comments on 'Beth Comes for Me'

For a first story, it was a good effort.

Hopefully a follow up will be a bit longer and

develop the story line a little more.

Thanks for the comment! I've actually written several stories of about this length and I will probably post them soon. I am really trying to get back used to this writing style before I shoot for any more than about 5000 words.

Oh and in case you were wondering Beth is a real person who does work with me. I write all of these especially for her and although the stories themselves are pure fiction I enjoy the reaction from her! This particular one was actually a request from Beth!

Thanks again for taking the time to read!

i absolutely loved it !! Great job!

i want more more more!

email me if u want ;) Storm@chatsa.co.za

(Storm )