All Comments on 'Bethany's First Bra'

I loved the imagery drew the reader in and how each character's personality was developed throughout the tale. Romantic, yet sexually charged - yum!

Hey, this is willow. Loved this. There's something almost unbearably erotic about a man with shaved legs wearing women's lingerie, and you've captured that wonderfully. I love how touched Bethany is when she gets the bra. And being the hopeless romantic that I am, I loved the end to bits.

(Just a tiny nitpick: I prefer "come" to "cum". But feel free to ignore me. *g*)

That was a lovely story, is there going to be additional chapters in the days ahead?

There may or may not be future chapters - it depends where the muse wants me to go...

~fish~

Great story! fun and plausible

Fantastic story maybe after they get married one of them can change into a total female And if so Maybe they can adopt a baby and breast feed it and live together