All Comments on 'Beth's Affair'

An excellent start for your first story. Well written and and descriptive. Please continue with more.

I hope you're planning to continue!

You certainly have the characters and plot lines to go for many more hot chapters. Length is just right too. Another episode ever week would be most welcomed.

Nice discreptions, good character building. Hope to see a lot more from you, but much longer, need time to jack off and shoot my own load.