All Comments on 'Beth's Little Secret Ch. 01'

So few get the chance.

You probably should have combined the two chapters as one.

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah - I have limited time for writing, and I get impatient :). But anticipation is a thing too, right? And I promise that most of my chapters will have at least one encounter, anyway.

So I don't get it, two sexually active teens, who can't say cock or pussy or ass? Or just won't say it? The number of times that you use an incomplete sentence makes this difficult to read. I had hope for this series when I saw it was 25 parts, something I could really get in to, but I don't think I can read all 25 chapters if this is how things are going to continue.