All Comments on 'Betrayal 08'

Awesome as usual - thanks!!!!

I am chomping at the bit waiting for the next awesome chapter to be posted. Thank you!

waiting on ch 12 and 13,etc......

Need more ....

I love it, as I loved it first time around - there still don't seem to be any major changes to the plot. One homophone spelling error I have to point out:

"Both women clung to each other and wept at what had happened and become of their family, oblivious to the marshal activity around them."

That should read: "martial activity".

5 Stars all the way! Next Chapter and soon! You got me hooked!

Great writing for the most part. But there is no north in space.

I was hopping for addtional chapters to the original story not a rewrite.

I love this story, this will be my third time reading it.

I would love to see sequel or another story all together from this author.

Nit picky don't you think this is a sci-fi & FANTASY so he could put in pink elephants in cute purple space ships shaped like tea cups so picking on one word in the whole chapter seems a bit over the top!

As always, great chapter and I can't wait for more. Now the demanding reader part: When are we going to see another chapter?

Please post more to this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

dont listen to any critics this is a great story!! your mecha combat was brilliant and the space side intrigue enthralling at my PC cant wait to read the next

Good story, when is the next chapter coming?