All Comments on 'Betrayal 08'

Good story, when is the next chapter coming?

dont listen to any critics this is a great story!! your mecha combat was brilliant and the space side intrigue enthralling at my PC cant wait to read the next

Please post more to this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

As always, great chapter and I can't wait for more. Now the demanding reader part: When are we going to see another chapter?

Nit picky don't you think this is a sci-fi & FANTASY so he could put in pink elephants in cute purple space ships shaped like tea cups so picking on one word in the whole chapter seems a bit over the top!

I was hopping for addtional chapters to the original story not a rewrite.

I love this story, this will be my third time reading it.

I would love to see sequel or another story all together from this author.

Great writing for the most part. But there is no north in space.

5 Stars all the way! Next Chapter and soon! You got me hooked!

I love it, as I loved it first time around - there still don't seem to be any major changes to the plot. One homophone spelling error I have to point out:

"Both women clung to each other and wept at what had happened and become of their family, oblivious to the marshal activity around them."

That should read: "martial activity".

Need more ....

waiting on ch 12 and 13,etc......

I am chomping at the bit waiting for the next awesome chapter to be posted. Thank you!

Awesome as usual - thanks!!!!