All Comments on 'Betrayal'

Great start to a fantasy! Keep it coming!

are you going to finish 'condemned'????? this was another wonderful start .. please dont leave us hanging. thanx!

I am really enjoying this story and hope that you will continue.

waiting for u to continue the story...u cant leave us hanging like this

Nice start to what seems to be a possible fantasy series. I hope you'll continue to add to this piece. Love your story concepts so far. Keep writing!

please we want more!!!!!!!!

Great start to what seems to be a fantastic tale. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I hope to see more of all your stories.

For someone who grew up in the streets..he's very wimpy and easily scared. It's hard to believe he grew up in the streets.