All Comments on 'Betrayal'

For someone who grew up in the streets..he's very wimpy and easily scared. It's hard to believe he grew up in the streets.

Great start to what seems to be a fantastic tale. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. I hope to see more of all your stories.

please we want more!!!!!!!!

Nice start to what seems to be a possible fantasy series. I hope you'll continue to add to this piece. Love your story concepts so far. Keep writing!

waiting for u to continue the story...u cant leave us hanging like this

I am really enjoying this story and hope that you will continue.

are you going to finish 'condemned'????? this was another wonderful start .. please dont leave us hanging. thanx!

Great start to a fantasy! Keep it coming!