All Comments on 'Betrayal Ch. 02'

This was really good, if not a little short and a long time in coming! I liked the way you switched to first person during the dream sequences. I just hope the next chapter is up soon! Keep up the good work!

I'm glad to see that you've updated. I think this story also has potential to be quite engaging. Tell me... is it taking place in the same world as Defiance? it seems like it. I'm enjoying both stories very much. :)

Nice next installment. I can't wait to see what happens.

Glad to see an update :) I love your writing and look forward to reading more of your stories.

i like where this story is going, please write more

I liked this story, but it seems like there should be more. Please add more.

we need more u cant leave it there

I don't care for wimpy characters and so I didn't care for this story. I think that if he's that of a wimp that he should of gotten his head cut off as a punishment. I think that would of been better than him cowering all the time. It's annoying!

I'm really enjoying this, it's so intriguing, I honestly have no idea what's going to happen next, which is wonderful =) I have to say the main characters vulnerabilty is one of the things I love most, too. Hope the next installment is coming soon.

Promising and likable. Hope, the author didn't lose interest in this story completely :)

Hope one day you'll come back to this, I really enjoyed it. It has so many possible directions it could go in that I'm intrigued. Loving the characters too.

As always, the plot work is incredible. I wanna know where you're going with this.

this story is great (even if it DID make me cry). i hope you continue it some day.