by SumOfAllThings
this story is great (even if it DID make me cry). i hope you continue it some day.
As always, the plot work is incredible. I wanna know where you're going with this.
Hope one day you'll come back to this, I really enjoyed it. It has so many possible directions it could go in that I'm intrigued. Loving the characters too.
Promising and likable. Hope, the author didn't lose interest in this story completely :)
I'm really enjoying this, it's so intriguing, I honestly have no idea what's going to happen next, which is wonderful =) I have to say the main characters vulnerabilty is one of the things I love most, too. Hope the next installment is coming soon.
I don't care for wimpy characters and so I didn't care for this story. I think that if he's that of a wimp that he should of gotten his head cut off as a punishment. I think that would of been better than him cowering all the time. It's annoying!
I liked this story, but it seems like there should be more. Please add more.
Glad to see an update :) I love your writing and look forward to reading more of your stories.
I'm glad to see that you've updated. I think this story also has potential to be quite engaging. Tell me... is it taking place in the same world as Defiance? it seems like it. I'm enjoying both stories very much. :)
This was really good, if not a little short and a long time in coming! I liked the way you switched to first person during the dream sequences. I just hope the next chapter is up soon! Keep up the good work!