All Comments on 'Betrayal Ch. 03'

by CyrusMann

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Finish what you have started!!!

Do not listen to the sex frecks that do not want any story line to interupe their jollies. If this is an ending ???

or a begining. Thanks for a story about real cost of adulterous relationships. Also shows how good people can do bad things and not even realize it at the time.

ryu77ryu77almost 20 years ago
She did all of that for nothing!

I can't believe I felt sorry for her, but with all the pleasures she received, it was not worth it.

She fell into debauchery, and will never get back up again.

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
I don't like BDSM so I just skimmed the last two chapters.

I am just reading this to see if there is some redemption somewhere down the line.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
How 'Bout That

Me too. Fucking cunt. Now to the end...

No rating

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Going somewhere?

This is a totally bullshit story. No even mildly intelligent woman would do something this stupid. To become submissive to a.master over a computer hookup. Not happening. Is Marcus really Brent?

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