All Comments on 'Betrayed Ch. 08'

this guy is living in a wheel within wheels world,

unsure if his best freinds are agents for his enemeis.

at the same time he is going thru a personality crisis - having a crisis of gender.

... so we wouldn't have to put up with dickheads like Phoenix764 and Anonymous/Kalifornia and the misogynistic drivel they spew. I'm loving the twists and turns on this roller coaster ride. These characters are so lifelike, they leap off the page. She also has my hometown nailed like no other author I have ever read. It isn't often I can find a story here that features people I actually care about. Keep it coming, Sweetheart!

Have been loving this story from the begining. Then reading along and all of the sudden many old memories came back with the Busted Flush. I could see Lisa being the equal to Meir. The only problem I have is what coulor would this story be.

I love the "Ogres have layers" comment and all the other dropped references. Keep writing! This roller coaster is hot and fast.

I was enjoying the story up to this point. I was hoping he's sue Susan Before all this started. With the way both Dianna and Angie like being fucked by him, it's disappointing to see he's going on hormones.

I love my new female body hairless 36d breast firm butt smooth skin.Now to live my dream bound head to toe ready for my first group gang bang.Filling my ass and mouth hard cocks.Swallowing loads of sweet cum filling my throat and belly and now my mouth.