All Comments on 'Better as a Memory'

I don't know what to say. Readable [it kept my interest]. Predictable, both half way through, and at the end.

At least they didn’t get married and become bitter and divorced. Neither one was mature enough to make it work. Thanks for the story.

I'm not sure why this was posted to Romance. This would have been better in non-erotic, because that's exactly what it is.

EH, 3 pages to come to his conclusion that they were too young and not really suited for each other. At least the broke up before marriage and kids.