by thirstformisery
It would be a pretty wimpy carpenter swinging a 16 oz framing hammer. Typical framing hammers are 28 to 32 oz.
Nothing like older women who know what they want and know how to get a guy's attention. Thanks for this little slice-of-life tale in which everyone gets what they want -- and offers the possibility of a future unimagined before this chance meeting.
Seriously? I suspect you swing your dick more often than any hammer.
A 16 ounce hammer was a steel "trimmer" used by professionals.
The HART California Framer was one of the most sought-after steel professional framing hammers. Weights ranged from the 18 ounce waffle head hatchet handle, to the 25 ounce extra-length straight handle.
Today, most professional framers use Titanium hammers, of 15 to 22 ounces, hitting as-hard as 25 plus ounce steel, without the consequences of wrist and elbow injury.
Thank you for painting a believable, erotic scenario. Well done.
The characters came to life very quickly and the story line was not run of the mill. Your dialogue has excellent realism. I enjoyed your narrative.
So I rag on authors who ignore grammar and spelling corrections from their software and all the rest. However this story just proves my point that if a story is good enough then a multitude of errors can be forgiven or not even noticed.
Your stour was great, the premise was oh so believable and it flowed very well. You even had a real ending that left a smile on an otherwise sad story. Oh and I didn’t notice any errors at all and I definitely couldn’t be bothered to check for them.
Great job.
A very believable moment where a man and woman take advantage of an opportunity to enjoy a primal pleasure without complicating things. I enjoyed this qiick read - the twists and turns and being left hanging.