All Comments on 'Better Start Karen'

Ok, I have a few issues with this.

The first being that you never gave a name to this woman that Jimmy hooks up with. Perhaps that was because you wanted to just make a character based around the Karen personality type, without making her relatable or redeemable.

Additionally, both characters seem to just be complete jerks. Especially with the ending, where you reveal that both of them are so arrogant, they each thought they won or were in charge. Clearly that was intentional, but it makes me wonder what kind of relationship you were trying to set them up with.

The woman sounds pretty at least, and their bondage situation is pretty interesting. Arguably it does sound a little more silly than sexy, since picturing a tall woman carrying around a shorter guy, tied to her in constant coitus, makes me laugh.

Focus on those points for any future bdsm stories you do; I think it would genuinely make for better content.