All Comments on 'Between Friends'

"they're not as bad as cigarettes, with all that tar and nicotine."

That is probably the stupidest thing I've ever read on this site. Cigars have MORE tar and nicotine than cigarettes.

Are you reading it for advice? Who cares if the woman is giving incorrect info/lying to her friend? Isn't it obvious she would say anything so the woman wouldn't freak out?

Thank you.

Whatever about cigars, love how vividly you captured interior dialog. Brilliant!

Appreciate the feedback. This was my first story - but it won't be my last.

You have a knack for writing dialogue and the inner voice. The conflict between the external and the internal, the social and the individual. Well done, indeed!

Great story! So glad I decided to read this. I liked the way you took your time with it and hope to read more of your work.

Excellent! Way better than average.Way up there! Please continue.Sensitive and loving -way to go