All Comments on 'Between Friends'

waste of ink, pure crap

This so called writer should be locked up in a mental institution. Just anther braindead parasite on the loose. Do us a favour and try a defferent line of work.

Clearly the below "critics" do not recognize a good first effort when they see it. I'm impressed and looking forward to Chapter two.

I thought this was a well-told and very arousing tale of a complex emotional and sexual situation. Thank you

Some people are idiots.

Great writing, great story. Keep up the good work. :)

The ones whom claims this is a great story. Frankly,it is crap.....

In the MENTAL ASYLUM !!!!!

Since the story is completely unbelievable, I skipped to the end and rated the story 1*.

I don't enjoy reading stories that are completely unrealistic. Fantasies are fine. However, I cannot get into a story that is so unreal that it is completely different than how people actually act. No description of sex is a turn on when you know it is impossible. It is like cheap porn; when obviously fake, it it not a turn on.

The author may write well but good stories will at least appear plausible.

This site is supposed to be restricted to those over eighteen years old. DWannabe has a few years to go yet. Poor wee laddie.