All Comments on 'Between the Push and Pull Ch. 03'

The way this story is developing, I just know I have to save the rest of my superlatives for the succeeding chapters! 👍👍👍👍👍

I like how the characters react and evolve. I see good things coming with this story line and can't wait to read more.

This is currently one of my favorite stories and that's because it's main focus is not sexual content. It has other aspects, too. I hope that there are many aspects to come.

I love both the narrative and the character development. I have been waiting for your stories ever since I've read Steeping Out In Faith. This series seems to be just as promising.

So well written 😁😁. The review of the sex scene is so intense and emotional. And it's nice to see Ryan opening up a little and getting to know him better. The whole chapter (as well as the other two) is excellent. Thanks for sharing and I can't wait for the next one.

It keeps getting better and better.....you re an amazing writer. ...pls keep it coming.. ..thank you.. .PJ

I like that ur making Erik and Ryan more complex characters. I would like to hear more about the studies of porns effect on adolescents. It looks like ur going in that direction-where Ryan will have an epiphany and his research will continue. I'm interested to see if this will bring a wedge in between them. I hope they turn out to be a couple. I like Erik but I want him to stop being so ditzy and unaware of Ryans turmoil or at least the reaction to it. I'm not sure if it seems genuine or not.

All in all I like the story so far. Can't wait to read more!

The character development is very enjoyable. And yeah - I really like the sexual tensions between the guys. Well done indeed.

THIS IS SO GOOD PLEASE WRITE MANY MORE CHAPTERS I LOVE IT SO MUCH

You are a pretty talented writer. One of the best in literotica!

Could we pleeeease get a continuation with ch. 4?!?! It's so good!

I am part of the demographic this story aims at. As a straight woman I love men but only find appreciation of men in some gay erotica & porn. You provide what I look for in life ... savoring every inch of the male body, the look of someone you can't stop thinking about, the power when you bring a man to the edge & take him to another place or have him savor bringing you there. Most erotica doesn't seem to care about any of this but the mechanics. Even when it's two men, I can picture myself there in a way I don't with hetero erotica & porn.

Have you given this one up? I sure hope not.

I am a hetero woman who loooves gay porn videos and it's absolutely true that the video is much more enjoyable to watch when the stars have clear chemistry.

I love these characters and the story, PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

I've been reading this and it's time to leave a comment. You're a good author. Keep them cumming! ~Kage