All Comments on 'Between the Slats'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This sickness must end -- 1☆

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this a pile of shit? "Of course it is"!

lc69hunterlc69hunterover 1 year ago

Well done. Could have more character development though, as how they got to this place in their lives

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sexy situation, but the ending needs more detail.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Was good til the last bit of him eating the 'John's semen from her. That is just so queer, it's not sexy at all.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 1 year ago

THINK YOU PICKED WRONG CATEGORY FOR THIS. 2 STARS CD

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 1 year ago

IMHO: Husband is a stupid piece of shit, who deserves the STDs he will surely get. Wife is a massacistic piece of shit who also deserves the STDs she also will get. Who knows, maybe the 'John' will get the clap, too. All in all, a very unreadable story.

Mel38oMel38oover 1 year ago

Last bit should have been more descriptive. Anonymous . Don’t knock it if you haven’t tried it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Is this really how the world is going? Cucks slurping at sloppy slut wives full of another man's cum.

The Western world is doomed.

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