by skullchaser
That was pretty heavy stuff - the kind of stuff you feel a little uncomfortable about saying you enjoyed so much!
Well-written, fast-paced and very wicked, I have to admit I loved it! Will there be more - if I can take any more?!
Five stars and thank you.
I was almost put off by the warning at the beginning, but luckily I persisted. I am delighted to have made that choice. A clever twist and a totally believable story made this story work, and the blend of character development and pacing were sublime.
Excellent work!
I love how you interwove the sexual intensity with the emotional development of both characters. The characters are more than just sexual puppets for the reader's mind but also very real people.
This story is one of the best I've read either on Literotica or other sides. I hope you work on more to be published. Thank you for sharing.