All Comments on 'Between Two Waters'

Very nicely done, Jackie---producing an excellent story in so few words is not easy but you've managed it. You've given a first-rate description of location and the limited eroticism is exactly right. Five star perfect.

This is beautiful and for just 750 words extraordinary even in detailing and building a high rising feeling ..... Clearly in this short cutted story sex would be out of place to describe it beautifully and so for my finesse, "her touch under her skirt doesnt fit here, " ....... Just a softtouch or rising finger a bit higher to the ultimate would increase the anticipation, not the touch itself or?

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I liked that it wasn’t over sexed. The touch under the skirt was a bit much or more than needed. Otherwise nicely done

The cigarette was a mood killer for me -- sexy, I'm sure, to those who smoke. Since that isn't a commonly used tag I may have to scan stories or just quit reading when it appears. I wanted to like the story but settled for a 3.

Paco de Lucía would be delighted. Algeciras... Between two seas and between two continents.

Congratulations.