All Comments on 'Beverly Needs A Plumber'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great start

Plenty of scope here for further chapters of this hot family incest. Get Bobbie's sister involved and how about Bobbie and Brian enjoying some hot gay father and son incest together while the ladies watch. The possibilities are endless for not one but several sequels. Go for it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
nice start

Great start to what could become a great story, would like to see where it goes from here

northboy1uknorthboy1ukabout 10 years ago
Good read

Good story, now on to read the other chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Childish. It reads like something a 14 year old wrote. No depth to the characters. No real story. Just a pitiful attempt to set up a shallow sex scene.

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