by BrettJ
An outstanding story! (Are any of Elspeth’s sisters still single and available?😉)
It's amazing how guys, and gals, can look all over and keep bypassing what we are looking for.
Great Job. You kept my interest and the story moved very quickly.
Thank you
I loved it and the dedication at the end was beautiful. Especially since I had a crush on Samantha as a wee boy.
Very nicely done! A whole lot was accomplished in this short one-page tale.
A rich,romantic feel made me sad to see it have to come to a close.
funny loving makes you think. in my favorites. Have you thought about a follow up story about them?
in my favorites
Ron
cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
with one small issue. Elspeth started out tall and wound up petite.
it took him long enough to notice her but when he did WOW 5 stars plus
Ron cowboyridecc@yahoo.com
Pretty good short read. Just wish the sex were a bit more detailed and involved, especially at the end.
Good writing...great story...very well done!
Even if you might be able to see where the story is going, it's a great read. It's a story with a happy ending for both of them. Thanks for sharing it.